Final Sequence So Far

Scene Breakdown, the different sections so far.


It going pointed out that there are two errors in this 22s video, a tiny bit of black type showing through right at the beginning on the right and the word 'Ancient' moves across the pillar when it shouldn't but thats just after effects being After effects and doing things it shouldn't...


After Changing up the type to fit on the tree's this scene looks much better, just feels more fluent. I could probably get the type to sit a little bit tighter to the tree's


Feels like this scene is just one big fade in and fade out, need to change it so it fades in and out slightly quicker so the rest of the scene is in focus for longer. I can also probably put the type slightly tighter to the clouds.


I like this scene. The angle the camera comes in at changes it up and a bit and the lighting works well with the dark yellow sky and dark green forest and floor.